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  • Art & Photography Re: Jealous of the Moon

    This is very pretty, you’re excellent at drawing, especially for your age. I love your shading, and how you’ve curved the shading in towards the girl, so that our attention ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Shadows

    Hello, and thank you for the review! This was good, an interesting read. Just a few nitpicks though: the black scenery Is this because it’s at night? If not, then ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue of an, as yet, unnamed novel

    Hello and thank you for the review, I have made the changes you suggested, and I hope it is more aesthetically pleasing now!

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue of an, as yet, unnamed novel

    This is my first attempt at a novel in a while, so please be as harsh as you need to be! I think I may use 'it' too much in ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Fools Tall Tales

    Hello, this is really good, the story line is compelling for us, and sustainable for you! I really enjoyed this, and hope to see more soon! *Crosses fingers* A few ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: I Can Has Fotograffy?

    These are incredible, I especially love the ones of the flowers, the way you've captured them is just fantastic! The one of the blossoms is particularly beautiful, the way you ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Manga girl (Aiko)

    Thank you for your reviews, yes her neck is a little long! She's not actually supposed to have a nose, I used blush lines instead, but the scanner didn't pick ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Facebook Mania!

    Hello! I can definitely relate to this, there are grammar errors, but it's not a serious poem I suspect! I will list them anyways, but it won't rhyme if you ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Photo Frame

    I honestly think this is fabulous! I think your writing style far surpasses your years in terms of maturity and vocabulary. You seem to have a natural flair for poetry, ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: They have spoken.

    Hello, and thank you for your review! Personally, I thought this poem was absolutely brilliant, the imagery you present is compelling, and rather beautiful. The rather chilling last line is ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Scarlett Johansson

    Hello, thank you for the review! This is incredible, I can't believe you actually drew this! As you say the left eye is a little off, but I didn't notice ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: me, myself and I

    Thank you so much for your comments, I'm glad that you like this, and get where I'm coming from!

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: In complete relevance to Biology...

    This is beautiful, I love your use of shading and bold lines. You put me to shame! I think it’s clever the way you’ve not added a face, so attention ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Manga girl (Aiko)

    I later went on to use her in a manga cartoon strip thing, I may upload that if people like this. She's called Aiko and she's entirely my own creation, ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Let Me Love You(9)

    Hello, this is good, I don't usually read romantic fiction so I won't pretend to be an expert, but I thought this was well written, apart from the odd grammatical ...

    Jul 23, 2009


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein