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Re: Jealous of the Moon
This is very pretty, you’re excellent at drawing, especially for your age. I love your shading, and how you’ve curved the shading in towards the girl, so that our attention ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Shadows
Hello, and thank you for the review! This was good, an interesting read. Just a few nitpicks though: the black scenery Is this because it’s at night? If not, then ...
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Re: Prologue of an, as yet, unnamed novel
Hello and thank you for the review, I have made the changes you suggested, and I hope it is more aesthetically pleasing now!
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Prologue of an, as yet, unnamed novel
This is my first attempt at a novel in a while, so please be as harsh as you need to be! I think I may use 'it' too much in ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: A Fools Tall Tales
Hello, this is really good, the story line is compelling for us, and sustainable for you! I really enjoyed this, and hope to see more soon! *Crosses fingers* A few ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: I Can Has Fotograffy?
These are incredible, I especially love the ones of the flowers, the way you've captured them is just fantastic! The one of the blossoms is particularly beautiful, the way you ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Manga girl (Aiko)
Thank you for your reviews, yes her neck is a little long! She's not actually supposed to have a nose, I used blush lines instead, but the scanner didn't pick ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Facebook Mania!
Hello! I can definitely relate to this, there are grammar errors, but it's not a serious poem I suspect! I will list them anyways, but it won't rhyme if you ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Photo Frame
I honestly think this is fabulous! I think your writing style far surpasses your years in terms of maturity and vocabulary. You seem to have a natural flair for poetry, ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: They have spoken.
Hello, and thank you for your review! Personally, I thought this poem was absolutely brilliant, the imagery you present is compelling, and rather beautiful. The rather chilling last line is ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Scarlett Johansson
Hello, thank you for the review! This is incredible, I can't believe you actually drew this! As you say the left eye is a little off, but I didn't notice ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: me, myself and I
Thank you so much for your comments, I'm glad that you like this, and get where I'm coming from!
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: In complete relevance to Biology...
This is beautiful, I love your use of shading and bold lines. You put me to shame! I think it’s clever the way you’ve not added a face, so attention ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Manga girl (Aiko)
I later went on to use her in a manga cartoon strip thing, I may upload that if people like this. She's called Aiko and she's entirely my own creation, ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(9)
Hello, this is good, I don't usually read romantic fiction so I won't pretend to be an expert, but I thought this was well written, apart from the odd grammatical ...
Jul 23, 2009
