roon

Hello! My name is Roon, I'm fairly new too. The people on here are nice, I haven't been on too long, but I've already made some friends. Just make sure ...

Hello again, Roon here. Again I thought this chapter was a compelling read. You say that there is a reason she would go for a younger guy, so I will ...

Fair enough, I look forward to it!

Hello again, Roon here! So I’m onto chapter 2, which has also proved a nice read! Again with the nitpicking I’m afraid though. Here goes, but again, I really did ...

Hello, Roon here! Well, first off, I think this is a nice idea, there is a lot of potential! Your main character is likeable, and easy to identify with. A ...

Hello, I’m Roon, I really liked your poem, I thought it flowed really well, and the message was put across really well. A few nitpicks though: From silent darkness a ...

Wow, first off, this is beautiful! Just a little bit of nitpicking though: With too much Or too little Attention, Should have a comma in there as such: With too ...

Wow, thank you for that, I'm honoured that you looked over it so thoroughly, and that you looked at my work! I will take this back to the drawing board, ...

Thank you Kiki and Peanut! I will try to answer your questions as best I can! Stuff I usually write, well poems or fantasy, I've also been known to dabble ...

Hello, you may gather from my username, but you can call me Roon. I'm slightly odd, but then that's better than being normal right? Or maybe that's what I want ...

This was touching, it's sad that this happened to your friend. i think all grammatical errors have been pointed out. It must have been awful for you to lose a ...

If it has magic in, these days, people will think it's Harryish, seriously don't worry about it, also it seems like Charlie Bone, which someone mentioned earlier. Also, you could ...

Haha, yes indeed! That is so true, thank you I'll try to think of an alternative! That made me laugh thanks!

This is fantastic! I really like this. It’s powerful and the imagery you use is perfect. My favourite line is Clouds eternal to play, It's a great line! It fits ...

*hands over greeting* Hello! I’m fairly new too! Wow but, I’m a green alien! My earth name is Roon, well not really but you can call me that cause it’s ...