roon

Thank you so much, your review(s) was/were really helpful! I'm going to make improvements with the help of your suggestions! Erm, I know I'm a newbie and everything, but is ...

Hello, sorry to bother you, but I have 3 poems in this thread, the first two are quite short. If that's too many, I understand. ~ Roon

hello, and thank you for taking the time to look at this, I hope it doesn't disappoint!

Hello! I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Well, this is a really nice idea, I can’t fault you on that! As for nitpicking, lets see what I can find. A ...

Hello, Roon here! So this was good except for a couple of things. The rhyming seems very forced, it actually distracted me from the poems sombre mood. People don’t care ...

Hello! I’m surprised no one has reviewed this yet, it’s fantastic! It took me a while to find anything to nitpick, but here goes: Letter and phrases bring music I ...

Hello! *waves exuberantly* It’s your friendly neighbourhood Roon! Anyways, I’m just going to review this one as it’s the most recent, if you want the others reviewing just let me ...

Hello! Roon here, first off, I quite like this, I think it has potential. Couple of nitpicks to begin with: Claustrophobic nightmare I would say A claustrophobic nightmare, I think ...

Hello, and thank you for your time! I wrote these really quickly, so they're probably dreadful! Please feel free to rip them to shreds! I have edited Poser and Happiness, ...

Hello, I’m Roon! Okay, this was nicely written, but there are a couple of things I would change. I think that maybe this could be broken up into stanzas, because ...

Hello, Roon here! I really like this! I assume you used filters of some sort? If not then I’m even more in awe. I like the way you’ve focused on ...

Hello, Roon here! I really like this, I think it’s something we can all relate to! A few minor nitpicks though: “Oh! Why didn’t I shed that ugly mask? I ...

Like the person before me said, it needs padding out and it‘s kinda contradictory, also you spelt weather wrong. But a nice idea, if you work on it, it could ...

Hello, Roon here, I think this is a great piece, showing real talent on your part, did you get given a grade? Anyways, I liked the repetition of the sentiments ...

Hello, Roon here! I really liked this, you clearly portray a sense of loss, we can all relate to this. It must have been hard for you to write, your ...