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Hello, thank you for the reviews, I will make changes, so thank you for your advice, it's always appreciated, thank you all again! ~ Roon

Hello, Roon here! I like this, it’s interesting, different. Okay, I’ll go ahead with nitpicks now! It just suite him so well. Suited My steps were almost in a strait ...

I like these, you clearly have skill with a camera! Okay, I don't know much about photography, but maybe you could play around with the focus a bit more, especially ...

Hello, nice to meet you, I’m Roon. I like this, it’s nice. There are a couple of things that need fixing, but apart from that the idea is original and ...

Okay, so I've taken this away and worked on it, hopefully it's better now, I've changed it quite a lot, so hopefully it will be... Well, better! Thank you for ...

Hello again, sorry this took so long, I’ve been lazy! Nitpicking: He saw some ripe red apples on a tree which had probably grown from a discarded apple core a ...

Thank you, as soon as I find some spare time lying around I'll get on it! Thank you for your comments and support! Yeah this is the one I was ...

Roon again! I really liked this bit, excellent work! Nitpicks: until the sun was far down. I think this sounds a little odd, maybe you should mention something about a ...

Thank you for taking the time to look at this. It was for a competition, but it was the thing to work off, some children had to continue it, I ...

Hello again, sorry this took so long, small crisis! Two days pass slowly as the festival continues, with minor inconveniences, such as people going missing, bodies turning up You can ...

Roon here! I’m sure you know my routine by now, nitpicks: The city clock tower started to toll for twelve I think you can forget the ‘for’ the small rickety ...

You know you’re a writer when: You’ve actually been banned by your parents from buying anymore books. The books you do have fill 3 bookcases and are beginning to pile ...

Hello, Roon here, back for more lol! Sorry it took so long, I had to go and eat. Okay, so there are a few nitpicks to get through first: "Cutting ...

Hello, Roon again. Well I’ll leave spelling and grammar because you have a word processor, and I’m English so I will probably get confused, as you say. Anyways, I like ...

Hello, Roon here! Nice to meet you. Okay, I will start of with nitpicks to get them out of the way! I really like this by the way! Festival time. ...