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Hello, Roon here, again! Sorry to hear that L hope things get easier soon… you should have told me there was another part ready for reviewing! :O "We'll run into ...

Wow, that's an incredible snap! The sky looks beautiful, not to mention the Colloseum itself! I like the angle you've taken it at as well! I'm so jealous, I wish ...

Hello, Roon here, I think this is really good, you have a real talent! The hair is particularly good, really stands out. I think you should make it smaller, as ...

Hello Rose, Roon here! This is so good, I’ll start with nitpicks on the prologue: once a pirate safe haven, This almost sounds like pirates are the ones who will ...

Crocks my lovely little munchkin! I’m here to review! I love this idea, the reader can really identify with your character. Your use of language is sublime. However! Before I ...

I'd choose the edible raft... it's edible right? You have the chance to see into the future and see either the love of your life, or what career you will ...

A comforting chocca mocca sitting on a table in a country kitchen, the weather outside just beginning to turn cold... Roon?

Hello, I’m Roon! Nice to meet you! I’m so surprised this hasn’t been reviewed yet! It’s really good! Anyways onto the reviewing before I praise you too much! Serpentine snatches ...

Hello, Roon here! First of all, I love the idea behind this, it’s so insightful! Nitpicks first though! i once cursed a man.. > Capitalise the I, also there are ...

Hello, I’m Roon, nice to meet you! Okay, I like the idea, but the use of language doesn’t really bring it to life for me. I’ll start with nitpicks: After ...

Right, I've made further changes, if there is anything else that needs doing please let me know, but I may not be able to change it very quickly as I ...

Hello, Roon again! Okay, as before I’ll start with nitpicks. That meant I was going to make a C minus if my haggish teacher didn't hate it as much as ...

Hey Taytay, thanks again for the review! This is quite short so there won’t be too many nitpicks! "I have done what has been needed to be done." I shook ...

Hello, I’m Roon! Anyways, this is a great poem, well written and has a very good flow. First I’ll do nitpicks though: All this time we danced around the truth, ...

Hello, I’m Roon! Wow, this is awesome. I love the wrist and shoulder guards, they’re very well drawn, I love the design on them. There are a couple of things ...