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Hello, I’m Roon, nice to meet you. I’m not good with introductions, so I’ll head straight onto the review. I wish I had the screaming back, to drown out the ...

Hi, I’m Roon, nice to meet you. I quite liked this, but I think, if you improved it a little, I would love it! It has potential, it’s nice and ...

Hi, Roon here, I thought this was really interesting, which is why I’m here, so here goes: I lay awake, < I think this should be lie. The rest of ...

Hey, Crocks. Look! A review: Things in red aren't essential and could probably be taken out, but it's personal choice. Red = ramble, make sure everything is pointful. Fairthen wasn’t ...

This is incredible! What a beautiful bird, its colouring is amazing. I really like how you’ve focused and angled this, taking any emphasis from the background and placing it all ...

Hi! You obviously have some real talent in photoshopping! This looks like it’s unfinished though, because of the massive neck. I think if you sort that out, it’ll be incredible. ...

Past the tall grass and through the field, two lovers lie and never yield. In the sun's warmth The lovers kiss, With true passion And magic bliss. I really love ...

I don’t think that’s entirely fair, because poems can be light-hearted too, it just may not be your thing. The summer has lately gotten colder, And the winter is shockingly ...

Hi, I think this poem has real potential, there are just a couple of things that you need to do to make it brilliant. The words you said to me, ...

I like this, the last two lines were wonderful. I don’t mind the italics, but the underlining, I don’t like. Also, the osmosis reference, I don’t like it. I don’t ...

I don't think it matters that it's short, I really liked it, it's to the point and sweet. I was sceptical when I started reading, I didn’t think it was ...

“Darkness is only a vivid illusion, An absence of light, they might call. Darkness, dark, blackness and whatsoever, Still it is darkness, no care, no hope.” You shouldn’t have a ...

Philosophical! Are you trying to tell us that, even when you add another person to your life, you still feel alone? I actually laughed when I saw it. :) ~Roon

This is really unique, you don’t see much conversational poetry, as aspiringauthor17 said. It was good to see a new slant on a break-up. I really like it, you get ...

Hi, so this is interesting. I like the unraveling element, I think that could really bring life to this poem if you used it in the right way. When I ...