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Re: Second Round: Choose The Mascot!
how bout a monkey/dragon , or a monky wrestling with a dragon or a monkey giving birth to badger .
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Setisia - Chapter 1 - edited
I think your first paragraph is very poorly written , after that i could see where you were going , and i liked it . i didnt read all of ...
Feb 24, 2007 -
Re: Very short , i need idea's to continue the story , and i
I dont think punctuation or spelling is impotant , and if you havent read somthing properlly dont deal death to the writer , thanks for pointing it out though . ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Very short , i need idea's to continue the story , and i
Chugalug was in a far corner sipping his blood beer and smokin some poor dried animal , he brought the thing to his lips , sandwiched the little head and ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: The Impossible Dream
Its hard to work out whats going on , you described the actions and emotions good , but its not anchored in a reality , when i write i try ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Bartimaus triligy
A fun read , at times you wander why your holding thirteen kiligrams of wood , On other rarer occasions you acctually sweat ( i did ) and forget your ...
Feb 7, 2007 -
Re: The Real Story Of The Three Lil' Pigz (with an urban twist)
I loved this, screw the fact it had no description other than lil- or how it jumped from scene to scene , It was fun to read and thats what ...
Jan 22, 2007 -
Re: Wet Dogs
i liked the fat bodies part-though it would of been better if you said they glistend with sweat , or blood-or somthing thats excreeted from pores in skin- any way ...
Dec 20, 2006 -
Re: Prologue to My First Novel
your style is exactly like mine which is acctually a bit creepy , anyway griffen keeper is rite-we dont care about the history or the exact hight of a charecter ...
Dec 20, 2006 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
the rat chewed upon my liver
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: mrhabbaba-hehe
it is good to be confident-and who said there going to die, i believe the headlines will read murdered by a wild( immensly attractive ) laptop wielding creep. Kay juran ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: mrhabbaba-hehe
hallo- I am immensly attractive.and the name rodent- it isnt a joke , i generelly think of myself as a rat. I think its a nice way to introduce myself-with ...
Dec 19, 2006
