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i am alive

( it does end up as a fantasy ) Wataru gave a little nod , the men that flanked him moved purposely forward , six swords were drawn naked . ...

I havent read annything like this before , in books too , and i dont believe your fifteen either. stop looking for compliments like these , write a book and ...

better than i expected , like jhone sawen's style - all aspects were good but not particuarily brilliant , the fact that you managed to create strong suspence and stronger ...

i liked it - seemes youve had alot of experience before coming here, It had a sense of tension from the first word- your description of fording bridge was very ...

i dont really have annything to add to what myth said , exept she forget to complement you , this was immaculate , i liked it . Reminded me of ...

I thought it was bloody good , dont worry bout spelling , it did have meaning and it did have aim , it explained half of someones life - the ...

somthing happened and my story was doublled , sorry , im not really sure why it happened and i cant accsess it to delete it - hmm

“On a snowy peak a man was getting ready to kill ‘imself , he was holding a bamboo spear tipped with a shard of glass. This fella was called Adon ...

Keep writing , me telling you your mistakes wont work , you'l find your litriture skills slowly develop over time , and your all ready on high ground , DO ...

stop this madness now , chimpanzeez are cool , dragons are way cooler , but then there's somthing completely different , ladies and gentlmen i have a suggestion , let ...

It depends what type of monky itl be , but please dont go for the gaint lizard , its everyones mascot- EVERYONES! . Maybe we could have a glossy red ...

This is what a story should be , simple and strait , from one point to another . I liked it , i like your language and how you describe ...

i loved it to bits and i want to read more , youre style is kind of like , hey-im-not-showing-off-how-much-vocabulary-i-know-but-i-can-make-a-very-nice-description, And what myth told you about 'sort

this is smart , its balanced and theres a real melody of words , i wouldent be suprised if i found this in a book , but , if this ...