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i liked it very much, if i could spell fabulus i would definitly use it here seriously though, your peice is very provokative, quite potent too, like having whisky in ...

Violent night Brutal night In Vietnam It snows napalm Babies die in wombs unborn Mothers scream in firestorms As we laugh away Christmas night A girl baths in the napalm ...

this is fine stuff, i acctually enjoyed it.

If you have ever seen a mouse warrior you will no just how hard they are to kill . Small little things that stand upright and hold spears , and ...

i cant really add- hmm- most of the mistakes were small and over all , you entertained me , which is a supermegacompliment , cause afterall thats what every writer ...

I feel so , feminin - ehyaah! nAruto could kick her (MY) ass. Sharingan is lame. sususu *Post edited by Jennafina.

“ A long time ago there was a dark kingdom ruled by a ruthless emperor , a man so evil that he himself despised the light . He had his ...

it was sharp and you translated your point well - but try connecting the sentences togethar , like at the start , you could of saidf " but the young ...

this was incredibly strange , in fiction it felt very real , and the way you told it through emotionwas clever. I started oput thinking that she was his duaghter ...

you didnt right this. this is the recolection theory of Antony Hopkins . you are a thief. - only kidding , ehhehe one of the best things ive ever read ...

you have solid melody , but the diolog wasent realistic - youre using them as mouth peices - "Tamia, look. You were alone in the forest, with minimal provisions, and ...

yOU'VE GOT SOMTHING , BUT THE WAY YOU MAP OUT YOUR DIOLOG IS TERRIBLE , ITS SO FAKE aND ARTIFICIAL - AND WHAT GAVE IT AWAY FOR ME WAS THE ...

tea,i love that name , but the way table and tea were on the first sentence was odd , made me read it twice but any way - love it ...

your insane . People dont post stuff like this , and thats why i cant help think your a bit bold . The acctual quality was , eh... it was ...

I think you got two good pictures there , that held my attention- the tree ( not the one with the windchimes ) and the heart baloon . i didnt ...