robyns37

Thanks a lot for the comments Snoink. I agree with you, about the storytelling and imagery. I've always had problems using literary devices and things like that, I've always just ...

Yeah, I agree with Krupp. I like the imagrey, but I felt didn't completley understand what you were saying. I feel like if you made it a little clearer, then ...

Just quickly, the words got a little more spread out on this post then they actually are. In my original poem, the second 'down' is actually just below the last ...

Wow, thanks for such a thorough review. I'm going to try and take all of your suggestions for revising this. I actually didn't really do any research for this piece, ...