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Thanks so much, I'll try that next time that I work on my story. I've been trying to be more discrete with my descriptions and when I introduce characters, and ...

Whenever I can for the most part. I find that I always have good ideas during my AP classes when I can't write :lol: But during the summer when I ...

I'm in the process of writing a rather long story, and my friend reads it pretty much as I write it and she just recently brought up that she has ...

I guess I was a late bloomer. I started writing last year when I was fourteen. My English teacher was really great and he just made the class so creative. ...

My favorite songs are not the singles. At the moment, probably "Of All the Gin Joints In All The World." Totally agree, I like to hear what the singles aren't ...

I really love this. I like the literary devices and in general just the imagery. I love the personification and the images you get from: "Death wandered these lonely ways, ...

Thanks a lot for the comments Snoink. I agree with you, about the storytelling and imagery. I've always had problems using literary devices and things like that, I've always just ...

I agree with Eimear, I really liked this poem, but I think it was mostly because it appealed to me as a writer. I think that you should make it ...

You know, although I agree with some of the other posters on the vagueness, I really liked the poem. I like how it was simple and short, and I think ...

This is the first poem that I played with structure so please tell me how that worked out. Reviews are always greatly appreciated! I Feel So... Alone. I feel so ...

I really loved this, I wish I could hear the music to it. And like other people, I really enjoyed the imagry. I think that the poetic quality to the ...

Yeah, I agree with Krupp. I like the imagrey, but I felt didn't completley understand what you were saying. I feel like if you made it a little clearer, then ...

Wow, the idea is definitely there. Don't change anything about the actual words, but I agree with piepiemann22 about how there is very little imagery and poetic device. You have ...

I actually, for the most part, like the required reading that we do in school. I like the old stuff with the multiple themes and the older language. I do ...

I don't know what it is, but I always have more fun, thus doing better in classes which I have a male teacher. I agree with many of the other ...