rmbarkan

The hand of grief brushed my shoulder, And fell down my back, tracing my spine. Sadness whispers sweet nothings into my ear As I sit, as I walk, as I ...

I was amazed with the way this poem took something so simple (a cup of tea) and made it beautiful. The poem flowed very well and created a very colorful ...

I LOVE IT!!! This poem was very good, the rhyme scheme was very well organized and the poem flowed very well. I really enjoyed reading your poetry, KEEP WRITING!!! P.S. ...

I love the color usage!! I think it looks really good, and i disagree with the first post. I dont think the edges should be blurred, i really like the ...

Little White, what art thou? Thy brothers and sisters They fall on trees, the land, And the palm of my hand. Little White, From whence didst thou come? From heaven ...

I found this poem very interesting, and I like how the beginning draws the readers attention. The meaning is deep, but I thought that the end lost the flow that ...

Wow i really like this because its not cliche as most lyrics are, and i like the emotion... Good job :D

I loved this poem, especially because i thought the topic was unique, and i really enjoyed the language use. I also thought it flowed very well. :) My favorite part ...

I loved reading this, the sentence structure flows beautifully and it was very good at portraying the emotions of saying goodbye. I really liked the title, as well.

Several nights have past away, And, quoth the bridegroom, "Come what may." There stands the bride, Tinted red and gold, For in autumns tints, This stories told. Like the passing ...