rimewind

I liked the story, but a few things jumped out at me. First, it took a while to figure out where the aliens were, in a building, in the brush, ...

ok, Fine ill leave it open but will someone please post

if no one posts in five days then ill end the story book

Crackle Roc I gazed out over the sea to the sunset. Something in the air told me something was happening some thing dangerous! Letting forth a shrill cry I lift ...

This story book is officially started! I dont have time start will sombody else do it?

oh yeah i just posted the country if anyone is a different biome tell me

sorry! i was unable to get on for a few days im waiting for one more person

name:crackle Age:70 gender:male Species:Roc Appearance:(see below) personality very unpredictable Mate:looking

i agree with all your reveiws thoygh you should let us hear whats going on in tor and liacs had!

i like the dragon alot better now however it looks a little awkward to only have scales on the tail and head maybe you should make the spikes on the ...

it is fine to be a velicoraptor after all this storybook is called anything!

Well this story book i thought it would be good to have as little limitations as i can so these are the rules -No godmodding -Only two characters per person ...

This is a poll to try and figure out which of my stories people like better..... Thanks everyone!

thank you for your comments they will be very usefull.

Name: Halasar Rank; Alpha male Personality: Courageous, always absurdly cheerful, no matter the situation. (Perhaps due to mother's untimely death) Description: See picture below. Age: 3 years Colony: