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The repetition of muse is very effective and it draws the reader in. From reading this it creates things quite visual in the readers head. It has made me think ...

Only wings show the statues to be angels, their faces and arms missing; how will Jesus heal the lepers without hands? That is truly genius This is good, very good. ...

Vestiges These nights are alone, hiding beneath the floor in a midnight’s cobweb Very good line with only a monitor’s light, dreaming of successes and contemplating failures. It seems to ...

It's good, however i feel that the rhyming feels forced, but that may just be me.

The Dresden files. It's a series of books. To give you an idea, it basically fantasy meets crime fiction. I would seriously recomend. They are by Jim Butcher

I agree with you. I think it should be put into a hole and be forgotten about personally.

In no order. Empress Orchid- Anchee Min Seriously one of the best books i have ever read. The book of lies- Brad Meltzer Intresting, but i would recomend. Raymond Chandler- ...

This book has one of my favourite characters of all time. Curlys wife. She is so complex. I think and every part she is in, it gets better and has ...

I actually quite like it. I am the essence of darkness, but also of light. I am the giver of life, and the destroyer of worlds. I know love and ...

LOVE IT! it's sick, which makes it work. I have one small suggestion, i think that it needs mabye one more line after the end. Maybe like a response to ...

It kinda has, thanks. And i do read poetry alot. I am published in fact. Sorry that sounded snappy. I'm actually scared to write now, but thanks.

Intresting but very effective. Good

Thank you for the advice, i will touch it up. Although i think i will keep expressionless in. I think it needs to be.

I am not quite sure what to make of it. I think for it to work, it needs to be longer: possibly one more letter. The actually concept of it, ...

Hello, This poem reminds of The laboratory poem, as i feel they have similar themes. This is quite a good poem, and you choice of language makes the poem more ...