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Hey! Is there any chance you could take a look at this. Thank you

Hi :) I like the content of the poem, I like what you're saying, well no like, but you know what I mean. Unfortuently, I don't like the form of ...

The over-crowded cafe hummed from conversations. Some somber, others not. I looked around from the corner, where I sat in a faded brown chair, holding a cup of strong black ...

WOO! This is a superb poem! i love what you were going for here, and it is quite cynical in a way, which speaks directly to me :D However, the ...

Hey! I really liked this....which is suprising as it's not usually the type of writing i like. I'd perhaps appreciate a little more form in the poem, i.e. a steady ...

Hi. I liked the theme behind this, i truly did, but i do think it need work. As this is personal experience, i think the emotion behind the piece could ...

Hi! I liked this a lot! For various reasons. Two being that this is my mind set to a tee and lily is my alter ego if you would :D ...

Hey :D I quite liked it and it sounds like it could be a really good song :) However; In the chorus where it says "spell" It makes it seem ...

All the classic signs of nerdism! :D I wish i had some of these traits, but none-the-less I am a nerd :P i quite like this form, structure ect. The ...

So here is my white flag, I physically can not fight anymore. My muscles ache from the battle, and my blood collects in pools on the floor. I look around ...

I stepped hastily along collapsing ridges into the depths of oblivion. Tormented sould are flung downwards through the many circles of hell, their screams sprint through my ears and leave ...

1. Male 2. 17 3. To be able to say what I think rather than go along with others views and opinions

Hey! Does anyone know an online site where I could find A Miller's tale? It is a story from the canterbury tales written by Chaucer. If they do could they ...

Second Glance is a novel written by Jodi Picoult. Picoult, is in my personal opinion, one of the most talented authors of all time. Second Glance is her tenth novel ...

The sun shone down upon the country road, captivating dust in it's beautiful rays. The horse moved slowly up the gentle incline, pulling the carvan behind it. It's head was ...