retrodisco666

Hello. I don't know what to make of it, if I'm being honest. Parts of it I find pure gold and other parts I think need destroying. For me it ...

It's sick and sweet. It is perfect. Truly well done. Very engrossing and portrays love really well. Keep it up ~Retro disco666

Thanks for the comments.

That's how i meant for it to come acroos. For a book i would be fine, but for a website it seems long.

I think the grammar errors make this piece seem more real. I don't think you should correct them. Well done, good piece. ~Retro Disco666

August My doctor says i have a problem. Sends me to the special hospital. They ask me questions like "what does this mean to you" and "how does this make ...

Thank you :D I see what you have said with the RED CAPITALS!!!! and i appreciate them :D and dark is what i do :D

Hey, i think personally that the last two lines kind of ruin the poem, not because of the fact that they are badly written because they're written good. It's because ...

I try and review the newer pieces. I think they are better, especially the poetry ones.

Hey, I was hooked from the first line, it sounded like my kind of piece. :pirate2: :mrgreen: It feels like it is moving way to fast though, i think it ...

Hello, Is mary ann dying or something because that's what it seems. I think this is quite good and it has a small sweet feel. Good. ~Retro Disco666

Hey, This is really well written, but there is just one thing. It doesn't have the feel of someone being stolen, it feels like the person has been left, but ...

I love it, really love it. Amazing, well done! write more of these! ~Retro Disco666

I really liked this, which is rare because this genre isn't really for me.. Great job ~Retro Disco666

Their is blood on the rug, on the dining room chairs, streaked up the walls, it's under the stairs. Blood in the bath tub all in the sink, all over ...