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Hey, I shall be your reviewer today. When you realize That the one you love Is gone for good And then, Your breath escapes And you can't draw in anymore ...

I sat eating breakfast table talking to myself. Today as everyone important in our school, was going to be my day. Mrs wyres, the schools drama teacher was going to ...

Hey, The writing in this piece is really good. The rhythm flows really well in this piece. I like this piece a lot. Keep it up. PM for anything. ~Retro ...

Thank you for the reviews everyone

Sweeny Todd It's a hard one " I needed her smell"

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Zevran Dex A female , tall, blond, Vampire. Is evil and seduces people and kills them.

8/10. I really liked it. It makes it seems tranquil and sad at the same time. I opened my eyes to see white walls, and a doctor.

PLOT Welcome to Dresforn. A magical world full of vampires and wizards and everything super natural, for now. The brotherhood are a society of assassins who want to bring the ...

When I look back on that day, I can see why Adam took my to the lake. I can now tell why he was smiling, why he looked like he ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer:D First things first. The rhyme. The rhyme in this piece makes it really hard to read and takes away from the actual feeling in ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer:D Until the last paragraph, for me, it wasn't a romantic short story. It had to much of a dark feel, but the last paragraph ...

Spot reserved for a guy. Do you want us to fill out a character thing?

Jowan "Jowan, you have everything right" she trailed off listing items she knew I had. "Will all passengers for the 12:15 flight to New York please make your way to ...

Name: Jowan Roche Age (16-18): 16 Personality: Happy, Bouncy, very camp. But he thinks he is invisible to the world. Background: He was raised by his mum, as his dad ...