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Re: Vultures
My skin is torn, salt in my pores, sun tinted red, vision is gone. The vulture they follow, waiting for me to drop, to tear away the flesh, and leave ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Oh how I hate the stars
Whoa. This is the first time I have been on here in a few days, so I would like to say thank you to everyone for their comments. Thanks. It ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Oh how I hate the stars
Oh how I hate the stars. How they mock me in the night. How they dance with the moon, and cast a pitiful light. Oh how I hate the twinkle, ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: Absence Of Sleeping Pills
Hey, I shall be your reviewer today. This poem was really hard to read. The sentences felt really drawn out and wordy. The repetition of the two stanzas does nothing ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The Robot Girl
Thank you. I have changed it to a better age I think. I'm thrilled you like it. Thank you. ~Retro Disco666
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The Robot Girl
Wires all over me, machines that help me breathe, A heart that can be seen on a screen, Is this a life I should lead? My life destroyed aged seven, ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The fall of Dresforn
The only female spot left is Lucy. Do you want her?
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The Red Herrin'-Chapter 1
Thank you so much for the review.
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The colour purple
Thank you for the comments. ~Retro Disco666
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The violinist
The violinist. I love the watch her play. She was playing notes that were not her own. Her sleek brown hair her pale blue eyes, her pink lips. Why did ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: I'm not alone and the wind would moan.
Okay first don't have a go at sodapop for reviewing the bad poem, she took the effort to do it and you should appreciate it. Secondly, I am experienced in ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The colour purple
This poem is from the point of view of Cecile from the book the colour purple. The grammar and spelling are intentionally like that. Thanks and enjoy. *************************************************
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: DeCelion, A School of Magic
Thomas How I love to hear them panic I thought to myself. I gave the hatch a nudge and it fell down. I stood there smiling up at them. She ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: The Orchestra
Name: Xavier Mellish Age (14-18):16 Instrument:Viola Appearance: Tall, Aryan, Medium build. Personality:Very nice and lovable. He is always there for you if you need him. History:Started taking lesson
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: The Strangers (Dead!)
Name:Alice pearls Age:20 Gender:Female Personality: She is dark but does the right thing. If you cross her you will know about it. Appearance: (use a picture, no anime) Power:She controls ...
Jul 7, 2010