retrodisco666

I think this could be one of the best I have ever wrote.

Hi, I am not a great fan of all the ones up to Lapras, but after that they took my breath away. Especially the make up one. Truly amazing :D. ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer. I think this is a truly excellent poem. I like how the length of each sentence kinda gets longer as if she spends more ...

Hey, I like this poem. It made me laugh. I know that probably not your intention, but I'm just cynical like that. I think it's length aids it so much, ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer. You have a solid story line and I want to see where this goes, but it is way to fast. I think you should ...

Hey, I shall be your reviewer. I only noticed one spelling mistakes. I believe it should be shirt instead of shit at the end. You don't capitalize your I's and ...

Dear God, I hate my life, I'm forced to live with a man, who will not admit I'm his wife. He beats me, mistreats me, and makes me feel sick, ...

Everyone will fall in love. Fact. Love is unconditional. Fact. You will find love in the most unlikely places. Fact. These three facts used to get me through the day. ...

Well done a million times over. This is one of the most powerful poems I have ever read. You used enjambment perfectly, it all flowed right. Do not change a ...

Hi, I liked it all, except this second stanza. I think it lacks something and doesn't really make sense. The only other thing was that you eyes will always be ...

Hi. It should be give. Not gives. I thought I would say this first as that is the negative over and done with. I really likes this piece. I want ...

Assassins and thieves. My ideal story. Your story has a very clear hook at the end which makes it readable. Your word choice was very good and fitted well. I ...

This is amazing. I actually cried because of the last two paragraphs. I can see why you got an A. The only thing I thought was that in the odd ...

Okay. I'm going to try to help. standing from afar, looking in a bar, at the girl talking about her dream car. I wish i could take her to the ...

You find sadness in the drunken man, who is asleep in the street, yet he finds his happiness, in what makes his heart weak. You feel sorry for the woman, ...