retrodisco666

Hey. This poem is, okay. I don't particularly like it, but it is not my style of poem. I think all you context is good, and it has a nice ...

AWWWWWWWWW!!!! This is such a sweet meaningful poem. The rhyme does not feel force which makes it even more special. I love what you are trying to convey. Never pulled ...

I like the content a lot. I don't know if it was just me, but it seemed to be moving really slow. I would try and add bits that might ...

I liked it a lot. her favourite song would carry her away, divide her soul into each individual note I loved that line. It shows such rich imagery and creates ...

Hey, I haven't read the rest, but I thought I would read this and give it a go. I thought the piece started weak. I did not liked it, but ...

Again I have to point out, that this poem is genius. Well done. ~Retro Disco666

Hello :) I'm back. spoke it up I know what you're trying to say, but this doesn't make sense. They're others like this in the piece, but nothing to major. ...

I loved this concept. I read a lot of poetry, but have not found a piece that deals with something like this. It brings an interesting take on everything which ...

Yes it will work without a prologue,don't worry ~Retro Disco666

It just doesn't seem very prologue like, I just think it suits better as a chapter 1 personally. ~Retro Disco666

Hey, I shall be your reviewer. This is very action pact, which is good. There seems to be no description however, which makes it seem more like a short story, ...

Hi, I liked it. Just as good as the first chapter. I can't wait to read the rest, and I really hope you liked it. No nit picks. PM for ...

If I'm correct in guessing what this is based on, then it's good. It is based on The twilight saga I think. As far as vampire stories go, this could ...

This poem is getting published

Hey, I liked to think that I am good with strange and different poems, so this would be in my category. No pain No happiness No excitement I think if ...