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This was amazing. It had very little meaning but it was rather deep which was surprising I felt like it was a very good lone poem. Let’s sit in the ...

Hey, To say you were rusty this wasn't a bad attempt. Your first line is a major hook so I applaud you for that, but after that, I am not ...

They say you shouldn't cry over spilt milk, but why do they cry over spilt poison. I crept along the dark corridor towards the targets room. He was due to ...

[Forever- Atonio is a knight who has been shot by the hunters and has been taken to this house. The hunters have been and have found element Earth and are ...

(I was thinking something like he gives off some sort of aurora that makes you feel it) Akeno "Adrian, please grown up or I will send you home."My patronising him ...

Name: Desmond Thorn Age: 45 Gender: Male Rank: Master Mage - scholar of Entropy Appearance: He has long black hair which is kept in a ponytail. He has thin wrinkles ...

Akeno. "Alexandria, don't jump to any conclusions. " I said. I looked over at the man. He was surrounded by many beautiful woman, but he had already looked up twice ...

Name:Helena Vultbridge Age: (no character under 16) 39 Gender: Female Race: High Magus Rank:Supreme High Magus Weapon/Magic: Entropy magic. (Death magic and weakness) Appearance: (Human and Werewolf f

Name: Eric Thomas Order Name: Neptune Age: (16-19) 18 Gender: Male Appearance: He is around six foot two. He has very thick wavy hair which is a dirty blonde colour. ...

I am not sure about this poem . . . please review ********************************************************* The surgeon is the artist and has talent with the blade. The man with the palette has ...

Akeno I felt the plane bump against the uneven runway, waking me from my sleep "We're here." Adrian said, throwing my bag into me. He opened the plane door letting ...

Akeno "The world of danger." I said honestly. "That is why we wanted both of you. Separate you are weak, but together you are strong. You can act like the ...

Akeno Oh my god. "Err thank you. Your are welcome, completely." I stumbled. I felt my cheeks turning Scarlett. That was more terrifying than when bats were trying to eat ...

It is beautiful. I love it when it is from the point of view of a dead person. I think your descriptions were good and worked well. A very good ...

Name:Cerin Heint Age: 20 Gender: male Role/Affiliation: (ie: Empire PeaceKeeper) Traitor rebel Appearance/Picture: (please no scene kids) Asian, short black hair, tall, well built. Has a scar going ov