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Hey, I really loved the imagery and emotion in the piece, it was very thought about and very well done. I am very glad this piece was done in haiku ...

Hello, I like all this poem apart from one bit. The shadows of an old home with fluorescent lights and stumbling customers piercing sound of cash registers’ clangings and sloshing ...

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(My element is already owned by the knights, so I think fire and both will be after it) Akeno "You both did good, real good." I said sitting the man ...

Hey, This was very interesting. It looks like it could go some place good, yet you don't know where. Have you thought about bringing in Sally Crow and what so ...

Hey, Okay, at the best of times I don't like rhyme that much, but here it works yet still annoys me. If you are going to rhyme I think it ...

A good poem. I think what you were trying to write about is a difficult topic and you conveyed it well. Like jagged said the rhyme did feel forced but ...

Hey, I loved this in more ways than you can imagine. I thought it was very original and when she died I was taken back. It was very short but ...

Hey, I liked it. It was very action packed, which was good. I liked how the MC didn't know a thing about it until it was to late. I thought ...

Hey, I think a name like Kayla if I am being honest. I liked them and though they were pretty. I think the second one is better but I liked ...

Hello, You have done a good job editing this, I didn't notice anything major. that he couldn't at least attempt to fight his fate this morning. That doesn't sound right ...

Hello, Is this part two or three to something? This was strange. You threw the reader in at the deep end and it worked quite well. It was very emotion ...

Hello, I think this will be my 100th review so I thank you for that XD The thing I don't like about this piece is that it has no structure. ...

Hello, I don't know what to make of this poem if I am being honest. I love the description you use and I think that was superb, yet all except ...