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Hey, This was good, but I don't see how it linked back to your title, if I am being honest. The structure also annoyed me. I don't think it looks ...

Hey, This was, well, astounding. It was so emotion packed, it was gripping. Your reference to the sirens was absolutely superb. I think I will go through this bit by ...

Hey, The content within this piece is good, so well done, and I really like what you are going for here. It doesn't quite feel like poetry though, I think ...

Eric thomas/ Neptune "Fine, I won't call you that. . . but the what should I call you?" I asked her. She bit her lip. I asked your name, I ...

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That was merely an idea moo :D I was just thinking along the lines of something that adds a twist to what you have put.

I think that could be expanded on. Maybe add twist like when someone gets out they go rogue and try and ruin what they have accomplished so far, or something ...

Hey, That is very sweet and very short. I was intrigued about how you would tackle something like this and yet again, you didn't disappoint. We’re falling over our heartstrings ...

Eric Thomas//Neptune//11:09 Black rose opened the door letting him inside. Hacker and Psyche walked in. It was such a relief not to be on the door, I hated it. You ...

If you would review it would be much appreciated.

Hey, I think most things in the poem were historically accurate which is a bonus. This is a beautiful poem full of rich imagery that really jumps out and captures ...

Akeno I was roughly shaken awake by Adrian, he was demanding I talk to our prisoner. I sat down in the chair opposite him. He looked rough. "You're earth?" I ...

I didn't find it funny so you are correct in thinking that XD, however I did enjoy the piece. It was not one of those pieces that you have to ...

Hello, YAY! a horror story, my favourite and you delivered it well. I thought your ending was terrific I have to say so well done for that alone :D As ...

Hey, I found this to be very original and quite humorous in a sense. This is the first "poem" I have read about zombies and I find the idea of ...