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Hello there, As a poem goes it is quite good, however some constistancy in the stanza lenght would be good I feel, however, for it's context I am not to ...

I stood by the entrance to the croft. The vast valleys and mountains of the world spiraling into the distance. The sun was setting causing the trees' to burst into ...

I am sorry for making you feeling this Jolene, I truly am x

Eric Thomas// Neptune I stood in the large black and white tiled room. Various pieces of broken pottery surrounded the ground around me. A horse and a castle were amongst ...

Eric Thomas// Neptune. I let out a cry of agony as electricity surged through my body. Hacker turned around for a second to long, the stun gun hit him square ...

Thank you

Fairground rides make broken hearts, or so I have come to believe. Toffee apples and candyfloss and the smell of autumn in the breeze. I sat by the entrance, my ...

Eric Thomas// Neptune. I put down the radio from Hacker. I hadn't seen a guard in a while so this was something different. I crept down the narrow passages on ...

Feet covered with white snow. Sticks showing from the blanket beneath our feet. We walk around the bleached trees, and over dampend leaves. I surround you with in my arms, ...

So what will the scouts be doing and what will the recon be doing?

Eric Thomas// Neptune Scout, I was going to scout. I would rather find out what is going to happen first. This was my thought as my eyelids became heavy. I ...

Hey, I'm going to marry F.R.E.D. He may be god. This is actually a really good poem which is the best part of it. It was very funny and I ...

*For Skins contest* I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named after my great father, Edmund Roberts, a soldier in some war or ...

Me again! I am glad you put this is an old poem, or I would have presumed you're slipping. My main problem was punctuation, I know I am not perfect ...

Back as requested. I know I am going to sound annoying, but I think I preferred it before. Now you have lost the zombie imagery that was so good about ...