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If you could review this I would love it :D Thank you so much

Hey If you could review this poem for me it would be greatly appreciated. Just any feedback in general would be great.

Congratulations! Very well deserved!

Hey I'm accepting WRFF :) My only condition is that's it's poetry. I can only review poetry, however, I'm quite content to read fiction

Hey, I know this might be a bit depressing and what not but I've recently written a poem about Rapunzel with cancer. If you felt up to it could you ...

I am fully at your disposable haha :) I am at uni so I've been through the entire system

Haha, submitted one earlier, not great need to get back into the flow. Trying to find something to review but sort of feel like that kid at the party who ...

Hey, i'm Ross! Retro on here. Was quite active last year and the year before...possible the year before. I write poetry idea why i stopped. Thought i'd try and start ...

7/10 I really like the first one....the second one not so much :)

My golden heel don't make it up the stairs. The lay askew with my new coat. My chin rest against the white porcelin of the sink, as an array of ...

HI! I liked the first one as it had very little form, much like that of E.E.Cumings, and i liked what you were writing about. So I don't really have ...

"of course it's in your head. But why on earth should that mean it's not real" -Albus Dumbledore. Today I stood at King's Cross station. Between platforms nine and ten, ...

Hi! I liked this :) My first comment would be could you condense some of the stanzas? When I saw it, it seems like a lot of stanzas but I ...

Hi! Well weirdish was accurate :) but none-the-less I liked it. I don't get the first line though. have I missed something with that? I think the third stanza however, ...