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Jasmine I walked into the room to find it completely empty. A room to myself. This school has finally started to do something right I thought to myself.I walked around ...

. . . How the hell did I not realise that. I will rectify soon-ish

Jasmine I stormed to the front of a line to get my timetable, others new betters than to question me. I gave my name and recived my schedule and my ...

Silented1- I could not agree more. My view started to change and I realise that it makes no real sense, I just wanted to post something. Thank for being honest ...

Shall I throw pennies in a well, making magic wishes? or shall I toss my dreams upon a falling blue star? Should I see a fourtune teller, offer her my ...

Name: Jasmine Drudge Age: 16 Gender: female Species:Vampire Weakness/Strength: Can not be in regular exposure to sunlight, can never truly love, will live forever. Has above human strengths and speeds

I will take one!

The cab driver held an outstretched grubby hand. I slapped down with a twenty as I threw open the door. "keep the change," I yelled. "Thanks," He yelled pulling away.I ...

That is beautiful. You are so lucky to have taken this. It is truly breath taking. Also I feel I should point that you must have some serious skills as ...

My phone jumped to life on my bedside table. It echoed loudly throughout my small New York apartment. I reached across and flicked on the brown faux lamp illumanting the ...

Thanks for the comment, He is nto a teacher no, he is a madman. Actually insane. He thinks he has an ochestra but really it is all just in his ...

Hey, Well erm, well um, well basically I loved it. It was very descriptive, very fast pacing, very "out there." You mad eme smile in places, you made me think. ...

Hello, I am presumming this is part of a novel,yes? I have no read any of the toher chapters of the story but I do not think I need to. ...

Hello, Positive points: *Very good imagery in places *Good Length *Was readable Negative pointes: *Very genric. The thing about the poem was that ti was very generic. There is nothing ...

This is based around the character Ivanov from Tom Stoppards' play "Every Good Boy Deserves Favour" ***** Every Good Boy Deserves Favour, simple to pick up. So why does the ...