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Re: Suggestions
I need some new books to read but I don't know what. This is some of the recent ones I have read. Empress Orchid The lovely bones The colour purple ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Silence. Deadly, paranoid silence.
Thanks for the review!
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Sophies' spirit
"Where is it? Where is it!" Jamie yelled from her room. "What are you looking for sweety?" My mother asked. Her hair up. She carried a soothing expression, and a ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Good evening! :)
Hello :D :D :D Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have. It seriously helps bring across your writing and you find people who ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Written on a boat ride home
Non-fiction? It sounds like a story, either way I loved it. It was beautifully written. You didn't need lots of over description it was just the basics really but that ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: White
Hello! Now don't take this the wrong way, but I couldn't really find a point to it. . . I mean I get the piece. I get the death part. ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Friend or Foe
Everyone should be friend there, although it seems like the question is in the form of a rhetoric. Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Brave On
Hey, If I was to sum this poem up in one word it would be . . . amazing. I really liked the way you wrote it, how it swapped ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Counting Pennies
Hey, I defently see your problem. My only trouble is I can't put my finger on what it is that annoys me exactly. . . I think it may be ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Silence. Deadly, paranoid silence.
Silence. Deadly, paranoid silence. It screams across the moors and bashes itself against the moon. It screams and screams in bloodlustful agony, until you can feels it's very breath against ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Heavens Mutant Children
So what's happening now?
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Where'd your username come from?
I love older music hence retro disco, and I am ginger have an obsession with death and tend to be cynical, so my friends were all decided that I was ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Que Sera
Hello! This is not terrible by any strech of the imagination, yet it is not perfect either, but you know this. If you were to elaborate and make this inot ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Heavens Mutant Children ( Daemonica High) CLOSED.
Everyone was quiet. Way to quiet. I stood up and strode out of my room and began to search the corridor, it was empty. I walked the corridors slowly. Small ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Elizabethian Sonnet: Bleeding
Thanks for entering! ~Retro Disco666
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