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Hey, This poem, wasn't really a poem. It was a list. And didn't really have much to it. . . . I think you need to go through it and ...

Can I have the Doctor please?

What's the point. Not to what I did, to anything. What is the point. beat I have been thinking. Is this real? Or do I really exist. I am not ...

Jacob Patch had not realised I has mentally killed him four times in my head. The third of which involved hot coals and a very rust pair of pliars. The ...

Name: Judith Melbourne Apparent Age: (above 21 please) 45 Gender: Female God of: Moon, shadow, fate Powers: She has powers to see people's future but she can only see them ...

Hey, I couldn't find any major flaw other than in the first two or three paragraphs a little more emotion to back up the visual would be excellent. I think ...

Hello, Well first let me give you my interpertation; I felt like that this was a memory of a woman when she was a child and I felt like the ...

If you are deep in belief of god then do not read this. It is my personal view and is not meant to offend. Why oh why am I hated? ...

Like others have said I share thie r points. My only other nit pick would be the first two lines contradict each other. The stage isn't classed as set if ...

As a rule I do not like the genre but I have to say this is amazing. I loved gthe opening as it was simply put and almost child like ...

Helo :) First off Welcome to YWS. Secondly, this kinda is not a poem. So I can not review it as one, however I shall contemplate it as another matter ...

My styurps clicked against the hard wood floor of the bar. The slated doors swung aimlessly in their frame. The piano was playing lightly in the backround. The smell of ...

b]Name: Dusty (Real name is Bill Nilit) Age:[/b] (Let’s not have a bunch of teens running around please... 18+ if possible, PM me if you want to be exempt from ...

Can I reserve a spot for a female muscian?

I killed Cinderella, shot her twice in the back. Didn't know her, didn't need to. I knew how it would end. Happy. Ever. After. Yeah, I tipped of the witch, ...