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Re: Scratched and Broken Record
Hello, I'm here to review. The first thing i'd say is that, i'd break it up a bit more. As it is very daunting and a bit off putting, but ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Judith What to do? We gods knew why we were here, we knew our time was almost up, that we needed to pass on our powers, but did the girl ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Stars sequence. *Reviews really needed*
The truth about stars I remember when I was six years old and my grandma died, I asked my mum where she went and she just said the sky. That ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Oh and here is your knife back
Can you remember the day? The day we met, the warm september breeze swarming over the gaggle of students. Can you remeber the moment? The moment we met. That changed ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: The Country of Meladora DT
I'll take Cinderella!
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Where should I post this?!
Most would just post it under short stories for each part, and if they intertwine say so. For example let say the short stories are all called desomnd and it ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]
Please! ~Retro Disco666
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Judith How could she know. Dreams were powerful, very powerful and for her to know, must mean that she was destined to carry on. She stood their patiently as I ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: The Wild Escape DT
Name: Suzanne Age:33 Years in the zoo:6 Personality:She is a docile creature. She is content with whatever happens and doesn't like to cause a fuss. She is loving and wants ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Zombieism (prologue to My Jealous Zombie ex-girlfriend)
Hello, my name is Adam Wallis. I am proffesor of Zombie studies at the university of Liverpool, England. I have written a definitive guide on how it works, and what ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Twenty-Fourth floor
He was a hot shot buisness man. He called himself "Bulletproof", well that was a matter of opinion. "Mr Walker, your wife is here to see you," I feigned a ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Judith Her whimper made my stomach turn. "I have two questions child. . . How did you find out about us? and which do you seek?" I asked. "Erm. Erm, ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Appeasement
I would not say it was coward, but wrong, yes. I think the whole conecept of what he was trying to acheive . . . It was like he was ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Children of Gods
Judith A got a painful knock on my side to find a girl apologising next to me. She looked distressed and angry, I wanted to dearly to exploit it, make ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: The Dark Shadow
Hey, I know this is your first post but i'm going to honest with you, okay? Well my first point would have to be it is a little short. Most ...
Dec 1, 2010
