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Miss, I truly loved it. It made me laugh(as you heard) It had good meter and you made the rhyme work, and it helps that I get the joke! Love, ...

Cindy I sighed heavily. Trying to nefotiate my step-mothers skirt was like trying negotiate an elephant . . .with a rolling pin. The cold dank basement was my home and ...

Switched Up! What would Hairspray be like if Tracy wasn't there? What would Grease be like without Sandy? What would Mamma Mia! be like without Sky What would Sweeny Todd ...

Early sunset amoungst purple moors. They catch alight in the forgetting sun. He stands and watches them, with her naturally, as the sun soars into oblivion. They are content with ...

Hey, This is a coursework piece in which we had to add another character into the piece Regeneration by Pat Barker The wooden door opened with a creak as Miles ...

Zelva Nay'all "Put the knife away, it is a bread knife." I said firmly. He looked up, his eyes narrowed. "Let's run it across your throat and see shall we," ...

Zelvna Nay'all All day yesterday when I was shopping for supplies everyone had been talking about the ruby. An old Elven man had a grand-daughter and said she had magical ...

"You can not provoke a man with a full stomach" - A quote about Chartism You can only put down a class for so long until they rise up from ...

Judith I let out a heavy sigh. "Dear, have you noticed that they are all together and I am seperate?" The realisation dawned on her like the first sunrise ever. ...

Name:Jessie Day Age: 15 Gender: Female Apperance: (Picture and Written) She has long red hair, she has a thin plat that runs along the left side of her head and ...

Hey, The content was good but difficult to read as it was just one big bit of text. I would break it up into stanzas and then try and change ...

Hey, The content was good but difficult to read as it was just one big bit of text. I would break it up into stanzas and then try and change ...

Hello my dear, The imagery in here was astounding and beautiful so well done. owever, like I seem to say reguarly that the poem needs to be balanced, and I ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! The problem here is that it has been done a billion times before. It is a short single stanza with the same drained imagery. I ...