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Can you hear the songbirds? They are loft within the sky. Can you hear the thunder of the machine guns as they cry? I stood at the field, the one ...

The small blue phone rumbled loudly against the dresser. Charlotte snatched it quickly to her ear and was sat upright straight away. She had been expecting news. "Hello, is that ...

I'd choose Cullen purely because it would not hurt as much as he's a fail and I'd just laugh myself to death about how he sparkles. What if you woke ...

Avatar. Is. The. Worst. Film. Ever. Fact.

When you read the reviews of people on here, the same thing is repeated and repeated and reapeated and repeated and reapeated over and over again! The thing is that ...

Hey, I'm sorry if this is a true story that has happened to you. The thing about the story is, you kinda knew from the off what was going to ...

HEY! This is another attempt to write in the style of Pat Barker. It has to be set in Craiglockheart which was a mental hospital in Scotland during the first ...

The flag blows magestically in the wind. Casting shadows on all the others around it. A nation which fights for freedom. Strives to aid the world around it. A nation ...

I stand on the brink of despair and I skip stones against the tides of oblivion. I watched them leap and plummet. They cast ripples against our lives. I don't ...

Hi, I went through after and checked off the ones I've done! If this was my bucket list, I would be halfway to dead :s cary thoughts. Fun read though! ...

Hey, I'm going to use my analogy of scaled. A perfect poem is perfectly balanced between description and emotion, this, is completely stilted. It feels like you've tried excessivly hard ...

Hey, I think this could really work as a romantic story. But it would have to be written like this all the way through. The colour purple by Alice Walker ...

Hey, I had to read it twice, it confused me! :) Okay, it was good, but far too short. It was more about the song than the dream, i'd swapped ...

Hey, This is amazingly deep. I usually loathe when people go from normal to bold writing but it created an obvious subtleness which I loved. My critic though is your ...

Here is my story :) Thanks. *Follows*