retrodisco666

Your off pitch laugh carried itself through dying and decaying trees. This was paradise. A dead forgotten place, that we were alone. You sprinted to the top of Yeoman's hill. ...

Hey, The improvements work in my opinion. I love it, and you should use your darker side more often, as you use it well. Excellent work, as always. ~Retro Disco666

The waves climb high, then collapse into the blue below. They mix among the already, and the forever there. swim little girl, swim I look out into the endless blue, ...

Hey, It didn't really work for me, if i'm being honest Coral. It's down to your form. It is very stagnant. And jarrs throughout. A poem about idolising someone would ...

Only one book has ever made me shiver with disgust and that's Regeneration by Pat Barker. A good read, but you have to have a strong stomach, as some of ...

Her warm blood massages the inside of my thoat. It's sickly aroma swims around the trapped space. I dig my nails deep into her arm, and pull out another chunck. ...

Ah right! It's only two train stops away til Lincoln so i'm not far from there either LOL! I get everywhere. ~Retro Disco666

Finished last week! It took me a very long time, but is very worth. The last full stop was like a weight being lifted from my shoulders. One more off ...

east-midlands XD i'm on the boarder of nottinghamshire and yorkshire XD

Hello! A fellow English person, how cool! Are you from the north or south? 'Tis a pretty amazing site and ask anyone a question and they will get back to ...

Moon ridden skies flow in the reflection from the water. We gaze into the depths, but not seeing past our appearance on the service. After a while, she's crying. Tears ...

Close your eyes and scream; Scream for the lost, the damned, and the forgotten. I remember that day when I sat unaware to the masses who would yet to see ...

"Jan! Jan!" Vic came sprinting down the street where Jan was setting up a small stall for the day. "Vic, what's matter wi' you know?" "List's are up town 'all" ...

Hi! I'd like to say I really enjoyed reading it. However just saying that wouldn't help! You have a suPerb balance of imagery and emotion but there is not a ...

HEY! The first thing would be there is no punctuation, so personally, I would go through and add some. The other thing would be to add more stanza's as it ...