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This was a beautifully written story! Very well put together, and so cute. You made it seem like a scene right out of a movie. That is a compliment by ...

Absolutely wonderful! I will also question why he would attack Charlie, who is pregnant, rather than going after Logan who has stolen his girlfriends heart. It doesn't make much sense ...

So many twists and surprises! goodness! I agree with rumbly, I don't like Jesse. I can't quite put my finger on why, but I dont like him...I don't know if ...

I loved it! :) can't wait to read more! though I was wondering why only chapter 3 was in your portfolio....I would love to read the rest of it. :) ...

Beautiful job! You have been able to capture a realistic sense of emotion, something I envy you for :) The only thing I have to say about this is I ...

It's such a great story! Please write more...i can't wait to find out what comes next. You have such a unique yet fluent way of writing, which draws me into ...

This is the last of what I have right now :) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ I woke up the next day, not remembering I had gone

Sorry it's been awhile! I've been super busy! here you go! :) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ “She’s beautiful!” I said an

OH NO!! He left! :( I'm glad you finally got another chapter up, I've been anxiously awaiting it :) This chapter is full of a lot of emotion and I ...

I like it :) I just think you need to take a second to read it over yourself, that always helps me. Only because there are easy-to-change errors that you're ...

Oh my goodness! so intense! I love this chapter. Really I do. Like Denia, I felt her pain...I don't think I would have been able to control myself if it ...

yay! chapter 10! :) I see you are keeping up the great work! There are a couple gramatical errors but I don't have time to drone on about them now, ...

I have come to quickly regret not doing this before hand but...those parts are basically thrown at you in medias res. I'm really sorry, I didn't even think about actually ...

I like it :) PM me when you post more! keep up the good work! ~Rent :)

Wow. I'm almost speechless but that would be an awful thing if I didn't tell you how much i love taboo. Please PM me when you put up more chapters! ...