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Re: Suicidal Moon
I'm sorry, it's rather lengthy. --- I live in this world, Of confusion and doubt, Where labels mean everything, I really like these last two lines they are really nice ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The Tiger, The girl, The boy and The face
My favorite was the last one I love the colors and the expression on her face. The tiger was very beautiful I loved how you only drew the head. The ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Octopus
That's really good(:!!!!!!!! It's so cute. I'd like to know what you used to color him/her in? It looks almost like paints, or pastels?
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: The Lovely Bones
Lovely Bones, is an amazing novel. The movie was pretty good too, I liked the actress that played Suzie. Anyways, I thought the book had a huge effect on it's ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
ANY Nicholas Sparks book if your into romance. For action, I would.. hmm shoot.. Idk I dont read action. For sadness get *Hatelist *The last year *I am furniture I ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Books that were made into GOOD movies
SO alot of nicholas spark books have been made into incredible movies. Like the notebook, message in a bottle, the last song, and dear john. All of those are really ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Golden eyes, sunset lips
Your hot breath hovered above my neck as you slid the tips of your fingers down my back. For the first time, I could feel everything. Suddenly you stop. Your ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: I love you
Woah wait! Sorry it's me again but... whahhh??? O.o! Your 12?!! If you are really twelve your a spectacular writer. You my friend MUST keep writing. It's obvious you have ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: I love you
You put the word "plait" in there alot, that kind of annoyed me to be honest. I loved the poem but I have no idea what that means lol(:. Anyways, ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Love Lies
Thank you Angel heart(: it was about my first love(:
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Write What You Know
I love this story. I love how you said you knew him then changed your mind. You made your readers feel the pain she was feeling. You made us understand ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Rhyming Poems
You can try rhyming ever other word. I dont know what a ballad is, but I ussually go through the alphabet and write down tons of words for each letter. ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Lust or Love?
I think this story is freaking sexy(:! Haha, but I think the word tongue was in there too much. You talked about kissing him constantly and you didnt tell us ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Colorado with My Best Heart
Clouds are cracking Blood is dripping But I am in Colorado with my best heart I love this line, it sounds so.. wow, descriptive. I can picture the clouds cracking. ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Poison
People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white or red regardless, I take a swig of poison, but don't take salt, but arsanic. What does that have to do with ...
Nov 22, 2010
