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I love this, but you need to add more on, this is too short. Some of your discriptions were confusing and hard to understand. Here are some questions that need ...

I liked the second but I loved the first. Like I said, I think you should explain why she hates him. I'm really curious why.

So, here's what I think, this poem is astonishing. It makes me feel like I'm the person your telling to breathe. When you say exhale I exhale, when you say ...

I'm not much of a poet but here it is. I'm the overshadowed bush, I love how you started this poem, very nicely done. In a forest of trees, The ...

SO CUTE(:! I love your little cute forrest animals and the whole story was just like "ahhh" cute(:. I love your drawing you have real talent there, you should be ...

Yo broskeeeey. I think (honest opinion) this looks extremely fake. Truth sucks, but I just want to help. First off your coloring is freaking fantastic but the dark night lamp ...

I thought this story was very cute(:. It was so sweet, and funny. She seemed like a fun character to write about, but I'd like to know why she had ...

Sickness to insanity I question my humanity. My decaying family, Is all but what remains . This line, is very creepy. Why is your family decaying??. - Knifes into my ...

Death It can be slow and painful Or fast and quick It may be just a knife But one day you’ll figure out That’s what gets the job done . ...

Haha I'm actually really shocked too. I thought at first to be honest, "mann this is gonna suck he drew it in sixth grade aha oh boy." But, I'm surprised ...

I do like this poem my grandma, who I was really close too died three years ago and I didn't think I would ever get over it. This is exactly ...

For His Life First things firsts, I think you should capatilize the first letter of every sentence or peice. his eyes burned with anger, his stare directed at the walls, ...

This peice was very good. It made me almost think about that really popular girl in school that leads the geek on and he falls in love with her and ...

I like writers block. That's cute.

Haha you called yourself stupid? What the poop(:? Haha I don't think your stupid. Anyways, I'm more of a romantic novelist myself but sciencefiction is cool too. I'm glad you ...