rememberme

Absolutely beautiful. SO much imagery and feeling behind this gorgeous peice. YOu are such a good writer, I wish I was half as good as you, the way the story ...

Listen to me. I know youre in a hurry but you've got to hear me out. I hear you dont stop for anyone that nothing stands in your way... Through ...

GENUIS! Bravo ! Bravo! I was smiling and frowning through out the whole story. Not only was it short, (which is always easier to review) but so good. You had ...

Raw emotion is just spilling from your poem. Honestly love, there wasn't enough.. detail or description. I see where your coming from on this, and the feelings very known to ...

This. This was just an absolutely beautiful peice. I use the same detailed and choppy writing style as you, except you do it 8000000000 times better. The flow was a ...

Concrete bare against my back. Feeling it's pebbles scrap along my skin. Breathing in the sighs of the trees around me. I shiver. You hold unto me as if I ...

The boy talks and stars spill from his lips. I want to catch them, as they fall. Run my tongue along the corners and feel the liquid twilight burst in ...

If love had eyes it wouldnt look twice at you. It's flame would seep straight through your core, love would fish out your soul with it's wittiful words and soft ...

Your tongue begs for mine behind the grinding of your teeth. I feel your nerves awaken as I slide the soft pad of my finger down your torso. Your breathing ...

I did like this piece. The only part that I wasn't quite sure about was when you said "because he didn't show?" That part didn't flow with your piece so ...

I did like this piece. The only part that I wasn't quite sure about was when you said "because he didn't show?" That part didn't flow with your piece so ...

A pale wonder, blooming with originality. Soft eyes set on an unseen horizon. Long hands outstretched towards the stars. To wait on this dream, is unheard of, to catch it ...

This is really good, unusual and keeps your audience eating out of your hands. You had a good usage of words and the way you shortened this up and made ...

Time to seal away this book of stones. Of old memories, & Unforgettable times. Time to forget that I loved & I lost. That time can't erase the forehead kisses ...

His hand brushed against mine. Electrifying. A bolt of lust rushed through my viens, and I found myself staring into his deep brown eyes. This was pathetic. Me. Him. It ...