rememberme

Wow. Your really good. This is just... fantastic:D! Why have you guys grown apart? Hah! Shoooot! This could be a durnnn story!

I really like this. I dont think it has much to work on at all. the moral is pretty simple and easy to understand. Remember when you broke my heart? ...

This poem is really .. beautiful. It seems like you find comfort and serenity in the rain. I like that. The rain restores and renews things.

I see him with his arms hanging unto the wooden cross. Nailed. I hear the screaming of his mother. I can feel the weight of the world pressing down on ...