rememberme

TheNewHero, I wrote this because I am going through a hard time in my life and I thought of all the suffering Jesus went through just so I could live ...

First of all if you dont have anything nice to say then dont say anything at all. Like your the one who should be judging others people work? Uh no ...

I dont ussually bag on others people work, but this doesnt make any sense. And the rhythm isnt very good. Your rhyming scheme isnt very good either, it sounds like ...

Our souls are in danger, our souls have lost We have done the damage but are refusing to pay the cost We have stood for what we believed in. And ...

I just love all your stuff. You freaking rock at writing. Heck yeah! I love this poem. Very nice and flowweey and just like wow(:

This poem is amazing. You don't read things like this everyday. You are a really talented writer. I love how discriptive and how your words flow so smoothly. It's very ...

Howdy Chickaah! My name's Madison, on here I'm "rememberme". I hope you love YWS just as much as I do. I just started like uhh yesterday(: Lol. If you love ...

curiosity got the best of me as it usualy dose i wonder "how come?" "Dose" It is spelled "Does" And how come what? and "what if?" What if what? all ...

AWWWWWWWWW this is so sweet and sad at the same time. Just reading it made me picture a girl crying on her pillow thinking of a boy who she knew ...

ooo pretty colors(: haha. and i like the discriptions very niccce. i like it alott. and the title is what pulled me in. It is very unique

I like it, but the flow isnt very good, i agree with the person above me, it is awkward in places but i like it(:

this is soooooooooo sweet, someones awfully lucky and whoever you wrote it for you must love them alot(: i loooove it

did you take these? they are amazing and its so awesome how you captured the sparrow looking up between the leaves. They are really pretty. Your an amazing photographer.

Thank you, and yeah I'm not the best speller(: haha, but I'm glad you were moved and that you both loved the poem. It means alot to me. Thank you ...

I relate to this poem. I softend when I read it.... It's good.