rememberme

Do you remember? For years I tried to forget.But I couldn’t give up, my heart said “Not yet.” For years I pushed your memory aside.Even believed my love, for you ...

This poem pulled me in. It made me want to read more by you're first couple of lines. That's a good start for a story, you want to pull the ...

This was.. quite alright. I sense that you wrote this in quite a hurry. ? Whatever the case, it's fine; but definately not you're best work. You didn't give good ...

Dear Hand, It's been a while since I've seen you. It's been too long since you've held me. You used to be bursting with ideas at the slightest touch of ...

So there's something I need wait- HAVE to tell you. Here it goes.. Shit. I don't know what to say. I love you. Shh, shh. Yes, I know you know ...

This peice describes my cutting addiction, in like three short paragraphs. I couldnt explain it, I didnt want to do it, but I did. One thing led to another and ...

Thank you. (:

What do you think me use do poop?

This story, it's about you isn't it? It seems like a personal take on the inside of somebodys feelings, you wouldn't even have to tell me, that this story was ...

I really loved this! You're amazing at rhyming and creating a rhyming scheme that you can stick too. I see no problems with this at all! It's simply brilliant, and ...

It’s the same damn thing with the same damn people. Drugs. Really? You think you need that to make it through the day? What about God? What about your life? ...

Today I cried I sank down to my knees Gasped for air And sobbed I held unto my pillow wishing it was him bit my lip to hold back screams ...

I wrote this for my mom on mothers day, it's kind of corny,but I just wanted to see what others thought of it. Enjoy.! You’re the thing that keeps me ...

This story was so beautiful. It almost made me cry. You had so much depth and emotion attached to every diary entry. I loved the beginnning it was my faveorite. ...

I thought you had a good story line. A devil, an angel, forbidden love. That's always a good story starter. But I think you could have done a lot more ...