rememberme

The smile falls from the stars Liquiod spilling from the rims of my teeth A beautiful disaster An unforgetable memory A breath of roses Silent but sweet Tears dripping like ...

Hiya angleheart! I'm remember me(:. I'll be your bud broskkey(:!!! haha, so tell me about yourself!

Awwww(: this is so sweet and touching! It reminds me of my little sister, I would do anything for her, and I'm sure you would do anything for yours! This ...

I liked this poem. And yes you can do it. Jesus will always be there to guide you, and he would never put you through something that he didnt think ...

This is so sad. I was confused at first, but then I caught on and realized how meaningful this poem is. This poem, has a voice. It speaks to all ...

me laying on the floor broken still and peaceful but by then it will be to late... i will be broken unloved I like this poem it's very sad and ...

This poem is very unique(:. Very nice. It is descriptive in some parts but not so much in others. I like how you opened the poem with sunflowers coming in ...

I agree with the first guy on corrections in grammar. Other than that, WOW veryyy niccce! It made me stop everything I was doing and focus all my attention on ...

[quote="niccinic15"]Solemn faces often found, Your lips move but make no sound. Piercing silence fills my ears When Death comes to prove my fears. The soul to take is way too ...

Short simple. All these things cause tears, tears are ussually brought to the eyes because of pain. I loved this poem, I love how short it is, and how it ...

I really liked this poem! And your rhyming scheme! It was so good(:! But, these lines threw me off a little bit: The government, with rules so lame? Or is ...

"Beautiful personalities brought down,By discouragement, sorrow and grief,Millions of future leaders faded away,Only a handful makes it through with relief" These are my favorite lines! You did a grea

I wrote love lies(: and Remember me! My name is Remember me! Hehe! This is a really cool idea! Where did you come up with it? Do you mind if ...

But the cold tile on your feetAwoke the memories of deceit That was the only line that kind of threw me off. Other than that *clapsverrrryloud* well done(:. This is ...

Thank you Night Shade(: My home daaawwwg! I wrote it like that because... haha Idk it makes the poem unique. I like that. I'm glad you liked it. I'm going ...