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Thanks, I was definately in deep thought when I wrote this, just having a bad day. She's like thirteen or fourteen, it's between her and a teacher. She doesn't realize ...

These pictures are really beautiful! You have a really good camera. My favorite one is probably, the first one. The flower looks so gentle and you can see through it, ...

He doesn’t touch you. He doesn’t dare touch you. You just sit there and watch him talk. And you like watching him, don’t you? Like the way his lips smack ...

This was a one of a kind piece, for sure. I have never before seen a story like this on young writers. I like it though, that your piece dares ...

This doesn't quite make sense. That might sound harsh, but this is a hard piece to follow. You should definately add more to it. Put some more detail in there. ...

Ooo this was nice. Very nice. Short, bare and to the point. I like that you were so direct, it's hard to get your point across in such little detail, ...

I thought this was good, not as terrific as some of your other work, but none the less, good. I like the story line, even though at times it felt ...

I am, a black satin ribbon twisted into a smile on the cold cement . A whisper at midnight, between cupped hands and flash lit lovers . Like the moment ...

"It just wasn't good enough." I glance down. Stare at her shoes. Navy blue, plastic platform shoes. I refuse to look up at her, let her have the satisfaction of ...

I really did like this. It was a tad too short. You needed to give your audience some closure for sure. You had a lot of big words put together ...

This poem was good. But if you ask me, it made no sense, probably because you didnt have a story line or plot. What are you talking about? Is this ...

I feel everything and nothing all at once. I feel the world reverse backwards, time stop, and I fear I might be forgotten. I feel lost. I am the only ...

Day one Nothing to say. Nothing to write. I can't breathe. I can't speak. Nothing. Day two Today is no better than yesterday. Day eight You're scent lingers all around ...

I am a chick, he is of the male gender.

Ohhh I love these pictures. You have excellent use of color and layout. These are very beautiful. Nothing to change. My faveriote was the first one, because I'm not one ...