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hey i'm a new member on yws and will review most anything only i have a couple of rules: it can't be super long or have really big words that ...

if u have the time can you review some of my poetry on my blog...i dont know how to post a link, sorry

hey can you review some of my poetry on my blog....idk how to post the link so you can just go to my profile and view my blog

Death It can be slow and painful Or fast and quick It may be just a knife But one day you’ll figure out That’s what gets the job done.

overall i think its a good poem :)

hey:) i thought this poem was really good, you really captured all ur feelings and put it into a well thought out poem. i think you should make it longer.