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Re: Pull the Trigger
All I cam say is WOW! I could feel all of your emotions and frustration and confusion coming through the writing. It is somwthing that one can relate to because ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Please Stay
Heyy!:) Just wanted to say that I think this poem is really good and it almost took my breathe away...I always have trouble finding a good poem to read but ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: GoodBye
Quick comment. I liked this piece. I could really feel the emotion and anger you felt towards this person. Overall it was amazing! It something that one can relate to ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: I think of you
Quick comment. I really like the way it started out and you made the reader want to read more but it was kind of flat at the end of the ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Awh this story is so sweet. I especially liked it when she was leadin up to tell him why she hadn't been in touch and I also loved th ending. ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Wow that story just about took my breath away. I could definetly feel the emotion coming through it and overall I thought it was amazing:) It really is something that ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: If I Fall....
hello:) I am rememberdecember and I will be your reviewer today. The title really caught my attention and made me want to read it. As I was reading it I ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Halloween Night
As I sit there, the blackness closes in on me. I am unconscious and unaware of what is happening. As I hear a car door open, I realize what has ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My heart
Been sitting in this room Trying to think of the right words to say. Truth is, I may not be perfect Or know all the right things to say, But ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Music?
Ya when I listen to music it inspires to write alot. I listen to bands like daughtry and hinder.
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: I miss you John
Thanks...and it is a true story:)
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: I miss you John
I can’t wait to see your face again. To hear your voice again. I know your parents don’t want us to be together, But it kills me inside that I ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden Love
(edited version) Hope you guys like it:) Staring back at his pictures Not being able to stop the pain As it tears through my heart I want to forget all ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: new reviewer:)
done:) thanks for being the first writer to submit
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
Hi there,jojo I'm here to review:) I think your prologue was very creative and had alot of details in it. You really built up the suspense and mystery as the ...
Mar 10, 2011
