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I open the window letting the yelling fade into the background. Mom and dad are fighting again. Reaching for my ipod to attempt to block out all sound. Panic starts ...

Well I really like this poem. And your usage of sensory detail was really good. I could feel like I was there with you. But towards the poem, I got ...

First of all, I wanted to start off by saying that this was very well written. But i don't like how you used some of the words in here like ...

I really liked the poem. But I think you need to add some punctuation in your stanza's so that everybody can tell when a stanza begins and ends. And also, ...

I agree with the previous reviewers... you should extend this to further the poem. But overall, I think you have an amazing beginning. To extend and make this longer you ...

Wow :O you had good usage of sensory detail...I felt like I was there with you experiencing what you were. This is one of the many things that makes a ...

How do you say the words, When you don’t want to listen to the truth? Feeling sorry for yourself won’t bring your brother back. Can’t you see what your doing ...

The wind runs through my hair As the moon says its last goodbye. Hands entwined like a vine. Feeling like theres no tomorrow. Were holding onto each other Like a ...

Hey there:) First of all, I want to start by saying that I love the way you wrote the poem and the way it was structured. The words really spoke ...

I honestly like this poem because I can relate to what its like to still be in love with someone. I kind of liked the structure of the poem but ...

Hi there:) I'm gonna start off by saying I loved this poem and I thought your rhyming was really good. The words really spoke to me and I thought it ...

I always knew you would be the one To catch me when I fall. You had me all along Wrapped around your finger. You just didn't Realize it. Soon enough ...

Wow :O When I read that all the words just flowed into place and went together beautifully. I find it hard to find poems that I really like but, this ...

Awhhh:) I thought that poem was just so good. It really showed how all the emotions hidden within in the words. I also like the way you said how he ...

Quick comment:) I really liked this poem and I wouldn't change anything about it. It really shows how many things you have to go through in life to get to ...