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I'm trying to review everything I see that is not a Chapter 17 sort of thing. There is no goal.

I think this resonates with a lot of people who read the books. I also didn't like the movies that much. The third was my favorite movie, but it was ...

I like this. I normally can't deal with women protagonists in historical fiction because I keep imagining elbowing everyone in the ****ing jaw if I lived back then and saying ...

I like this poem. Few lines, but you get the feeling that each word was carefully chosen, which is also evocative of the spirit of Ramadan, right? Have you thought ...

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thanks for the amazing comments you guys. I'm really a beginning animator, I can't do much better than this right now. Have you tried looking at this gif with like, ...

I disagree that the poem is in any way arrogant. There are examples of perseverance of course, but sometimes you don't relate to anyone at all. Sometimes it feels like ...

I love this story! However, here are some tips: I chucked and sat down in the rocking chair beside her bed. You meant "chuckled" Also, easy on the adverbs. You ...

It's been a workweek! Plus I'm trying to get a comic book penciled before July ends! However I wanted to enter something into the contest because pigs are cool. This ...

I think this is great!

Wow, this is short. Use the words you have left to beef it up. Cautiously, Nate peered around a rouge colored wall [rouge is makeup, not a color. You don't ...

a football player in an office telling bad jokes The problem, though infinitesimal, still managed to considerably delay the production of the new line.  People were already overworked when the ...

She even wrote, “It’s not you, it’s me,” line . wrote the...line, maybe? Otherwise, good job! This story was emotional and interesting.

I loved this story, it's really developed and strong.

Already to familiar, so she might as well sign it and seal it up. She could already see the surprise in Margot’s honeyed eyes. Too familiar. This story is great! ...