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Hahaha, good job? The ending looks like something out of a farce comedy, somehow. Anyway, the only major correction I can make is this: “Heyy, Liz , im on ma ...

Hi! I don't usually crit novels, but I've got experience writing them so I'll try to help you with this first chapter. First off, the spelling and grammar errors are ...

Oh my god this is a masterpiece no seriously I really, really like this. You're right to be proud because it's hilarious. I've seen published novels that were ten times ...

"We are on the scene for at least one hour" "My first week on the job, I didn’t do anything. I simply sat in a ugly blue chair, in a ...

sorry couldn't figure out how to delete this with the new interface.

What do I think how do I feel; I hope to catch a wink Or a smile on the photo reel. You look at me and I am confused: not ...

Aaah..."horseshoe", it's one word ...it's late :o I'm cutting this review short because it's a working day tomorrow!

Cool poem. I like the message a lot :D Last line: "You can too" A Small Person May Have Have A Big Voice People Say You Have Noting Else In ...

I wanted to go for a sort of slam poetry beat with this. So for the full "flavor" of this "piece", imagine a pinstriped-blazer-wearing, possibly intoxicated woman screaming it to ...

yeah I'm just gonna pretend this never happened.

Brilliant. I really relate to this. It seems so breezy but my entry is terrible so I'm one to talk, yeah right. Anyway, the point of the contest was not ...

for this contest About the story: we all have acquaintances, then people we hang out with daily, then people we just mess around with, then our real friends. There are ...

I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE BASKETBALL I LOVE THE WNBA I LOVE THE WAY THIS STORY ENDS okay that's just sounding weird but ...

Another thing to consider is what he is doing at the moment. Your boyfriend is acceptable for a BGF if he is not A) performing open-heart surgery or B) crying ...

I didn't read the other chapters. I'm trying to get my review total up, I won't lie. This is clearly a rough draft due to the grammar, but I like ...