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This is such a sweet and emotional poem, but it doesn't come off as sappy or cliche'd, which is really cool. It does leave a lot of questions in my ...

The beginning, end, and other parts of the poem in quotations are planned to have a quote/sample from one of my favorite podcasts, the News Quiz on BBC Radio 4 ...

I don't know. Bribe the teachers. Why would they bother banning one book? Maybe it's full of violence. Maybe it's Lolita by Nabokov (and you'd be bored trying to read ...

Hi. I liked this story, I have a taste for good fun positive stuff so it's fine. I didn't think it was overly romantic, just a nice night out. This ...

Wow, this is really emotional and well-thought-out. I'm curious to learn more about the characters. I noticed some typos like putting a period before 'she said' in a sentence instead ...

I can't find much to critique. I'm not the best of poets myself and I think this one is structured and written well. They are the kings of selfishness The ...

Hi! Split this up into paragraphs and fix the grammar so it's easy to read. I didn't understand the end of the paragraph, what's milk or paper? I don't get ...

It was funny and intriguing! However, the interior monologue of the MC needs to be broken up into much shorter paragraphs. As it is, it's hard to read. There are ...

A parody of Skee-Low's "I Wish" with some of my experiences/opinions... Here are links to the song, probably better to listen before reading or it won't make any sense Original ...

Wow. I like it a lot. I didn't get why you said "Please..." or "sleep", I mean I don't see what they add, except as showing how tired/confused the narrator ...

so cool! I agree, this is very inspiring. I'm so tired of the nightmares and chasing the light. It's time to make some changes, time to set things right. Another ...

hahaha that would be funny, but I think they'd catch you. They can do an internet search for the text. They're really into that now. Plus what would you do ...

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I wrote this many years ago and didn't like it, possibly because a stupid relative told me it sucked. Now I found it by accident on my hard drive, read ...

I'd use sentence punctuation and case (i.e. don't capitalize every word) and spell out the words, without using U and that stuff--it makes the poem seem more real. Also, spell ...