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I get the feeling from reading this thread that very few of you know how to be a reader. All of you know how to be a writer, and rant ...

i need to know all anyone can tell me about milkmen, particularly in the U.S. ~®®§

The red rocky ground. The stars that seemed to go on for eternity. The sandy taste. I'm not sure about the description here, it just doesn't flow for me. Lifeless. ...

I like dragons and I like dragon stories (as is proven by the books i brought home from the library monday), but I had trouble reading this story out of ...

Right now, I'm having trouble reading this story around all the grammatical errors. I suggest taking what you've got and pasting it in a word document. Once you've got it ...

It was really good, There's just a couple problems with the story that I'd like to comment on. JASON I don't... Oh, I know what you want. And the answer ...

with words so perfect, like the devils tongue. but lies are all you get. they may tempting. they may be sweet. but when you get there, you'll find no treat. ...

Enigma It is near, very near. Yet far, oh so far. It’s harder than rock, Yet softer than silk It is salty, it is sweet It is messy, it is ...

Where or when, or why or how? Why wasn’t it you I saw? You've got a problem with the rhyme here. Try replacing replacing saw with how. A feeling of ...

I like the imagary you used, it really painted a clear picture for me. However, I did feel that the second verse was a little, how should I put it, ...

we live, and we win, we lose, The and in this stops the flow for me, but maybe that's just me we see, and we are blind, These two lines ...

Hey people, It's day two and I'm on track, not ahead, but on track. Kay, I added you to my buddy list, i hope that's okay. By the way my ...

Oh, okay that makes sense thanks.

i'm definitly doing it. I can't live with out chaos(as is evident by the fact that I'm doing my own mini NaNo right now, at the same time I'm doing ...

Thank you guys so much! I've read through some of them and this is exactly what I need. Thanks, ~®®§