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Re: Naked and Ashamed
I'm not sure if this a continuation to one of your stories or a new one- I love it! But you should try and grab the readers attention-
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: Flash Foward Pt. 1
I like it! Can't wait untill you continue! It Grabs my attention and it makes me want to read more of your story! (Sorry if that dosen't make much since)
Aug 11, 2007 -
Re: Relics: Chapter One
I agree with Griffinkeeper- but other than that I like it!
Aug 11, 2007
