redneckgirl91

Welcome, People here are very nice and helpful, good luck on your writing!

That helped, although the Fight isn't really with the Main Character, but it did help!

Awww, don't be upset, im going to be doing a kind of a battle/duel scene in my book too, and I'll use all the advice you gave me !

ok, first, when you start a novel- since this is the first Chapt, you need to GRAB the readers attention, make them want to read, get them curious- and aside ...

Thanks for the advice, It kinda sorta helped- thanks!

I'm not sure if this a continuation to one of your stories or a new one- I love it! But you should try and grab the readers attention-

Hello my fellow writers In my book (novel) i need to write a physical fight scene- the one I have now Is kinda dull and doesn't really grab the reader- ...

I have some- I can only write when I am alone, I don't know why, but when my familys around I cant write- I normally do my best writing at ...

ok, I hope you like my story, and Im a new author, so I hope you like it! Chapter 1. "Erica can you come down here please?!" My mother called. ...

I like it! Can't wait untill you continue! It Grabs my attention and it makes me want to read more of your story! (Sorry if that dosen't make much since)

I agree with Griffinkeeper- but other than that I like it!

Hello, Im new here, I am 16, and in the process of writing a book, Ive never heard of this webstite , but so far it sounds good !